crime
학생이 쓴 원문
The last government very respected the human rights of criminals and prepetrators.
Even if they commit crimes, they are easily released.
As a result minor crimes and felons more and more have increased.
I think that the law should protect good citizens from criminals.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this! regardless of this situation, South Korea is still considered a safe country.
Share your thoughts later in class!
Aki~
The last government very respected the human rights of criminals and perpetrators.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> The previous administration has been gracious and generous with the rights of criminals and perpetrators.
Even if they commit crimes, they are easily released.
>>> CORRECT!
As a result minor crimes and felons more and more have increased.
>>> As a result minor crimes and felons have increased more and more.
I think that the law should protect good citizens from criminals.
>>> CORRECT!
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