Crimes are bad but sometimes they can have reasons.
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Hello there, Bella!! ^_^
Thank you so much for doing yout homework.
I really appreciate all your efforts.
You are a very good student!
I really like the way you shared your ideas!
Wonderful! Oooppss! by the way, happy Friday!!
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~Teacher May ^_^
By the way here are your corrections:
I can\'t understand why offenders commit crimes.
>> CORRECT!
Why offenders do bad behaviors?
>> Why offenders has bad behaviors?
Some offenders have malevolence so they enjoy to commit crimes.
>> Some offenders is malevolent, so they enjoy commiting crimes.
However,other case of offenders commit crimes because of their inside story.
>> CORRECT!
Maybe their inside story was very urgent or emergent.
>> Maybe, their inside story was very urgent or emergency.
Think about your mother is in emergency.
>> Think about it, what if your mother is in emergency?
Will you going nothing to do for your mother?
>> Will you do nothing for your mother?
If your mother is stunned, what will you do?
>> If your mother was stunned, what will you do?
Bring her to hosipital is not problem but when there was a traffic congestion, the situations may be changed.
>> Bringing her to the hospital is not a problem, but what if there was a traffic jam? The situation may be changed.
If my mother was in emergency, i might be broke the traiffic laws.
>> If my mother was in an emergency, I might broke the traffic laws.
Like this, if something important and crucial for me is in a dangerous situations,
i can\'t think anything. I only think what i save.
>> If an important person to me was in a dangerous situation, I couldn\'t think anything. I only think on how will I save him/her.
>>OR: If an important person to me was in danger, I couldn\'t think anything. I only think on how will I save him/her.
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