criteria to recruiting nurses
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If I could hire nurses, I want to see the nurses\'s flexibility and how much they care for patients from the heart.
Because I believe that if a nurse has those two values, she/he must have possibility to grow.
Nursing skills or judgement can be improved as time goes by.
Therefore, I highly appreciate those values.
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Hi, Olive! Thanks
for your good work. Please review the corrections carefully.
- Debbie
>> If I could hire nurses, I would want to see their flexibility and how much they care for their patients.
Because I believe that if a nurse has those two values, she/he must have possibility to grow.
>> Because I believe that if a nurse is flexible and caring, she/he has the possibility to grow.
Nursing skills or judgement can be improved as time goes by.
>> This is a good sentence.
Therefore, I highly appreciate those values.
>> Therefore, I highly appreciate those characteristics.
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