critical period to acquire language
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I agree that young children acquire language faster than adults. This is well represented in the field of human development theory. Developmental researchers said that there is a critical period to acquire language.
However, I don\'t think that it is impossible for adult to learn second language.
Because studying and learning something is more important to practice and replay than to age.
Also our willingness to learn is very important.
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The views that you expressed today are on point.
I agree with hem as well.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I agree that young children acquire language faster than adults.
>> I agree that young children acquire language skills faster than adults.
This is well represented in the field of human development theory.
>> Correct
Developmental researchers said that there is a critical period to acquire language.
>> Developmental researchers said that there is a critical period in acquiring language skills.
However, I don\'t think that it is impossible for adult to learn second language.
However, I don\'t think that it is impossible for adult to learn second language.
>> However, I don\'t think that it is impossible for adults to learn a second language.
Because studying and learning something is more important to practice and replay than to age.
Because studying and learning something is more important to practice and replay than to age.
>> It\'s because practice and repetition is more important in studying and learning than age.
Also our willingness to learn is very important.
Also our willingness to learn is very important.
>> Our willingness to learn is also important.
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