Crystal
학생이 쓴 원문
Crystal
강사 첨삭
Goo job, Lucas! You finished your homework very well. Here are my corrections:
1. I went to boulder gray mountain and I saw a rocky pebbles.
>> I went to the gray mountain boulder and saw some rocky pebbles.
2. It was hard.
>> Correct.
3. I take that in my home.
>> I took them home.
4. Pebbles are green and it was crystal.
>> The pebbles were green and they turned out to be crystals.
5. I keep crystal.
>> i kept the crystals.
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