culinary trend

2025-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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One of the the reasons many foreign like Korean food is for social media and K-culture instead of taste itself. After COVID-19, like a Youtuber online creators are increasing too many and too fast. Many students hope is to be become Youtuber because they can rich easily. I think Korean foods tastes diverse and delicious than other countries. But I don\'t agree that some people take advantage of gaining their money

강사 첨삭

Good day, Ms. [이름]!
As Korean food spreads across different cultures, it\'s likely being modified to suit local tastes or preferences. For example: McDonald\'s, taste of food varies in different countries.
Aki~


One of the the reasons many foreign like Korean food is for social media and K-culture instead of taste itself.
>>> One of the reasons many foreigners like Korean food is for social media and K-culture instead of the taste itself.

After COVID-19, like a Youtuber online creators are increasing too many and too fast.
>>>  After COVID-19, like Youtubers and online creators are increasing too many and too fast.

Many students hope is to be become Youtuber because they can rich easily.
>>>  Many students hope to become Youtubers because they can become rich easily.

I think Korean foods tastes diverse and delicious than other countries.
>>> I think Korean foods taste more diverse and delicious than other countries.

But I don\'t agree that some people take advantage of gaining their money
>>> CORRECT!

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