cultural difference(ielts task 2)

2011-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Nowadays, Many people feel cultural difference as they travel around the world because every country has its own culture that differentiate with others. In my opinion, to some degrees, It is desirable to agree and follow other country's customs and life style as long as they don't deny well-kown values that is received by ordinary people such as privacy right. In India you should not shake left hands with others because Indian people consider a left hand as a dirty hand. This customs can be acceptable relatively easily. to be continued...

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Hello,

Thank you for your time in sending your article. It's very informative....

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