Culture in own nation influences the styles, and interest of generation.

2018-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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What influences the styles, values, and interests of generation is not well known to me. Styles and values and interests of generation is varied to nations. I was born in kwang ju and lived in the same place. Sometimes I watched TV and enjoyed it and learned from it. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

Have a great day ☺


What influences the styles, values, and interests of generation is not well known to me. 

>> CORRECT


Styles and values and interests of generation is varied to nations.

>> Styles, values and interests of generation varies in different nations.


I was born in kwang ju and lived in the same place.

>> I was born in Kwang Ju and I\'ve been living here ever since.


Sometimes I watched TV and enjoyed it and learned from it.

>> Sometimes, I enjoy watching TV and learn from it.


Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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