culture that i want to bring back to South Korea

2022-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The Korean culture that I want to bring back is the school life of students who were like students. Because student\'s studentliness is disappearing as time goes by. I don\'t feel very good because I saw many students who are following to be adults at school.So I hope the old school culture will come back

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The Korean culture that I want to bring back is the school life of students who were like students. 
>> The Korean culture that I want to bring back is the school life of students before.

Because student\'s studentliness is disappearing as time goes by. 
>> It\'s because students\' eagerness to learn nowadays is disappearing as time goes by. 

I don\'t feel very good because I saw many students who are following to be adults at school.
>>CORRECT

So I hope the old school culture will come back
>>CORRECT

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