cultures of marriages
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think it\'s right to compare the culture of marriage in every country.
Weddings culture in all countries is unique and precious in itself.
In conclusion, wedding in other countries is good and our wedding is good, too.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
Let\'s talk about different wedding cultures tomorrow.
I think it would be interesting and informative.
See you tomorrow!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t think it\'s right to compare the culture of marriage in every country.
>> Correct
Weddings culture in all countries is unique and precious in itself.
Weddings culture in all countries is unique and precious in itself.
>> The wedding cultures in different countries are unique and precious in themselves.
In conclusion, wedding in other countries is good and our wedding is good, too.
In conclusion, wedding in other countries is good and our wedding is good, too.
>> In conclusion, weddings in other countries are good and our weddings are good, too.
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