Curfew
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I think curfew is safety rule. Because young people do not have project one-self activity. So too long and too late outside is dangerous. Second, young people is growing. So sleep to late cause growth control.
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Hello, Hye [이름]!
Curfew serves as regulation for minors who do not have full capacity and perfect decisions to decide for their activities. It makes them safer to stay at home than roaming outside late at night.
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>> I think curfew is a safety rule because young people do not have full control of their activities. So, being too long and too late outside is dangerous. Second, young people are growing. So sleeping to late causes growth stunt.
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