Curfew
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We also say the curfew is right choice. However we say about negative effect do curfew. I think it is bad for children to face dangerous situation. Because children have no parents protect, they will embarrassed. And no have protect oneself and no independent. So make their to face social is not bad.
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Curfew regulated the actions of young people during late hours for their own safety. Maybe they may not like this but they have to follow the law of their city and their parents for their own good.
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>> We also said that curfew is the right choice. However, we mentioned negative effects curfew do. I think it is bad for children to face dangerous situations because they have no parents to protect them, they will be embarrassed. They cannot protect themselves and have no independence. So making them face public is bad.
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