Curious George
학생이 쓴 원문
Curious George learns the alphabet.
George lived with his friend, the man with the yellow hat.
One day George was looking at some books.
They were full of black marks.
Then the man with the yellow hat came.
And he saw George tearing the books.
So the man took a big pad an draw a big A.
And he draw all the alphabets on the pad.
Then he started to draw stuff with the alphabets.
And he teached George the letters.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Marie~
Curious George learns the alphabet.
>> CORRECT! George lived with his friend, the man with the yellow hat.
>> CORRECT! One day George was looking at some books.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> One day, George was looking at some books.They were full of black marks.
>> CORRECT! Then the man with the yellow hat came.
>> CORRECT! And he saw George tearing the books.
>> CORRECT! So the man took a big pad an draw a big A.
>> So the man took a big pad and drew a big A.And he draw all the alphabets on the pad. >> He drew all the letters of the alphabet on the pad.
Then he started to draw stuff with the alphabets.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Then he started to draw things with the alphabet.And he teached George the letters.
>> Finally, he taught George the alphabet.
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