custody
학생이 쓴 원문
I think there are two situations in this case.
When both of them who had extramarital affairs want to resister the birth, and neither of them want to that.
Recently It happen when couples dirvorce nobody want to have custody of their chlldren, so continue the sue.
It is natural that he(or she) should have the right who can give good condition for children in the custody and resistration.
Who is the resistration right for?
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for writing your thoughts. Please educate me, in Korea, does the person who registered the birth of a child always have the right?
Let\'s talk about this later.
Aki~
I think there are two situations in this case.
>>> CORRECT!
When both of them who had extramarital affairs want to resister the birth, and neither of them want to that.
>>> When both of them who had extramarital affairs want to register the birth, and neither of them wants to do that.
Recently It happen when couples dirvorce nobody want to have custody of their chlldren, so continue the sue.
>>> Recently It happen when couples divorced nobody want to have custody of their children, so they continue suing each other.
It is natural that he(or she) should have the right who can give good condition for children in the custody and resistration.
>>> It is natural that he(or she) should have the right who can give good conditions for children in custody and registration.
Who is the resistration right for?
>> Who has the right for registration?
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