Cyber bullying is popular these days, What do you recommend to stop cyber bully.
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I like you answer about cyber bully as an IT major I\'m still having a research about how to stop cyber bully. I hope that I can come with a solution with this problem worldwide.
Teacher Travis.
Cyber bullying occurs as IT techniques are getting develop through social networks such as Face book and instagram that are made of private things.
>>Cyber bullying is a technique that is growing through social networking site such as Facebook and Instagram.
In celebrities case, this problem is so serious that sometimes legal punishment are happened about malicious comments.
>>In the case of celebrities, this problem is so serious that sometimes legal punishment occurred about malicious comments.
To stop cyber bully “Internet real-name system” is often launched on the some specific web-site.
>>Correct.
But it cause another problem that gives some clues about people who write comments and are interested in specific fields.
>>Correct.
As It leads on another private infringement, those who use the social networks are forced to have the internet manners to others.
>>Correct.
>>OR: It leads to a violation, for those who use social network are forced to have the internet manner to others.
I think that respecting each other is the best way to reduce cyber bullying.
>>Correct.
>>OR\" I think the respecting someone\'s privacy is the best way to reduce cyber bully.
and they should recognize some facts that they may know each other in reality and they are also the same human.
>>Correct.
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