Cycle hibrid bike

2015-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I like to ride bikes because they are fun and excting things. Riding bike is much better than riding cars. I ride bike when I go to football club, and bakery. I like riding bike than walking because it's much faster and better. So every weekends I go to the park to ride bikes with my dad. My dad ride bike when he goes to his work. Riding bike will help ou to get healthy because you pedal.I think that the bike will be a great object when you are dieting. Do you like to ride bike?

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN!:) Happy Tuesday!   Unfortunately, I don\'t know how to ride a bike. I have a weak sense of balance. Also, when I was a child, I can\'t recall having a bike as a toy. Maybe that\'s why I didn\'t have the interest to learn even p to this day.:p My children like riding bikes just like you do. My son can ride the bike on his own. I can still remember you funny story when you rode your bike to pick up or collect the pizza that you\'re mom ordered for your dinner.^_^   Thank you again for this composition, Min. I enjoyed reading plus I\'m learning a lot about you.^_- See you tomorrow in class. Goodight!:p   =Teacher Mayleen=   I like to ride bikes because they are fun and excting things. >> I like riding bikes because it\'s fun and exciting.   Riding bike is much better than riding cars. >> Riding bikes is muxh better that riding cars.   I ride bike when I go to football club, and bakery. >> I ride my bike when I go to the football club and bakery.   I like riding bike than walking because it\'s much faster and better. >> I likeriding my bike than walking because it is way faster.   So every weekends I go to the park to ride bikes with my dad. >> So every weekend, I go to the park to ride bikes with my dad.   My dad ride bike when he goes to his work. >> My dad also rides the bike when he goes to work. Riding bike will help ou to get healthy because you pedal. >> Riding bikes will help you be healthy because you get to exercise.   I think that the bike will be a great object when you are dieting. >> I think that riding a bike will be a good activity when dieting. Do you like to ride bike? >> Do you also like to ride a bike?

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