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what is difference between dish and food?
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many korean people do many activities in thier free time to improve health
>>Many Koreans do many activities to improve their health in their free time.
you know it is not only physical health but also mental health in the free time,
>>You know it is not just to improve physical health, but also mental health.
someones go on a trip with thier family , someones go to the restants with thier friends and someone do exercise such as walking, jogging and swimming
>>Some people travel with their families, some go to restaurants with friends, and some do sports such as walking, jogging, and swimming.
in my case there is a onething i alway try to do in my freetime
>>In my case there is one thing I do in my free time.
that\'s drinking beer.
>>That\'s drinking beer!
honestly i\'m beer-lover so when i have free time, i call my friends to meet
>>To be honest, I\'m a beer lover, so I call my friends when I have time.
after we meet, we go to the pubs in my neiborhood
>>After we meet, we go to a pub in the neighborhood.
while drinking beer, we talk about many things such as social issues, economic issuses, and sometimes someone\'s love story
>>As we drink beer, we talk about many things, such as social problems, economic problems, and sometimes someone\'s love story.
actually that\'s a funniest things so drinking beer is great way to relieve my stress.
>>Actually, that\'s the funniest thing, so drinking beer is a good way to relieve stress.
while drinking beer with my friends, i feel being healthy.
>>I feel healthy drinking beer with my friends.
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