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2011-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Question : What is your idea of a perfect day? Answer : First, I wake up lately, and then enjoy a brunch leisurly. I drive to the large park with my cute puppy and boyfriend on perfect sunny weather. Then, I read books under the tree while eating sweet fruits(melon, mango), a cup of coffee. After sunset, I go to home. I enjoy dinner while watch America drama. My perfect day have to not work. ^^;;

강사 첨삭

Hello again [이름]!

           Wow! I think that would really be a great day. I hope we can spend time doing that together. kkk

Keep safe! I'm excited to have class with you later.

_Louis_

Question : What is your idea of a perfect day?

>>Correct!
Answer : First, I wake up lately, and then enjoy a brunch leisurly.

>>Answer : First, I wake up late, and then I enjoy brunch leisurely.
I drive to the large park with my cute puppy and boyfriend on perfect sunny weather.

>>I drive to the large park with my cute puppy and boyfriend on a  perfect sunny weather.

Then, I read books under the tree while eating sweet fruits(melon, mango), a cup of coffee.

>>Then, I read books under the tree while eating sweet fruits (melon and mango), and drinking a cup of coffee.

After sunset, I go to home.

>>Correct!

I enjoy dinner while watch America drama.

>>I enjoy dinner while watching American dramas.

My perfect day have to not work. ^^;; 

>>My perfect day would be not having to work. ^^;; 

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