Da[이름] Bunting
학생이 쓴 원문
Among four islands which we visited through hopping tour, I like Da[이름] Bunting island best. First, the shape of the island was interesting. It looks like a pregnant woman, so locals call it \'a pregnant woman island\'. Secondly, it was amazing to see a big lake inside of the island. Some visitors could swim in the lake. I have never seen the island with a natural big lake like the island. And I liked to take a short walk along the lake. Lastly, the border of Miracle Border at the end of the walking trails gave us an awesome opportunity to see the different colors of water.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing with me the great stories about your trip. I quite guessed that Da[이름] Bunting Island would be your favorite because of the way you described the lake and ocean, together with the difference in the color of the water. It’s nice that as you visited different places, you got to appreciate nature more!
- T. Caitlyn
Among four islands which we visited through hopping tour, I like Da[이름] Bunting island best.
>> Among the four islands that we visited during the hopping tour, I liked Da[이름] Bunting Island the best.
First, the shape of the island was interesting.
>> CORRECT
It looks like a pregnant woman, so locals call it \'a pregnant woman island\'.
>> It looks like a pregnant woman, so locals call it “Pregnant Woman Island.”
Secondly, it was amazing to see a big lake inside of the island.
>> Secondly, it was amazing to see a big lake inside the island.
Some visitors could swim in the lake.
>> CORRECT
I have never seen the island with a natural big lake like the island.
>> I have never seen an island with a big natural lake like this.
And I liked to take a short walk along the lake.
>> I also liked taking a short walk along the lake.
Lastly, the border of Miracle Border at the end of the walking trails gave us an awesome opportunity to see the different colors of water.
>> Lastly, the border called the Miracle Border at the end of the walking trail gave us an awesome opportunity to see the different colors of the water.
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