Daily dialogues#4

2020-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

B: I am good, And you? A: I am well thank you. Well...Do you have any problem? why have you been so quite nowadays? B: Um....I met a girl at julie’s house warming party two weeks ago and I have been interested in her and getting to open up my mind to her. But I heard that my best friend ,Toby likes her last Friday So I was torn between love and friendship. It’s pretty difficult to take that on board. A: Poor my boy, So have you decided whether you progress with her? B: I will put on the back burner and move away from the situation and they can crack on. A: Oh that’s amazing things of you to do. B: That’s why I might have been so quite for a couple of days. I needed some time to think about it. A: Yes. Absolutely, I understand you. B: Thank you for understanding me. How is it going with your dating? A: I don’t know. She definitely likes me and I do but I think she still guards up to me. I feel like she puts wall up against me. B: Oh.. so have you guys talked about that?

강사 첨삭

[이름], hi!

We have another interesting discussion again tonight as I see this dialogue transcript containing a couple of topics. Thank you for sending it for me to take a look at.
Prepare some of your questions as well if you have.

I will see you later.

-T. Donna =)


A. Hello! How are you?/ How do you do?

B: I am good, And you?
>> Correct!
Or>> I am good, and you?

A: I am well thank you. Well...Do you have any problem? why have you been so quite nowadays?
>> 
A: I am well, thank you. Well, do you have any problem? Why have you been so quiet nowadays?

B: Um....I met a girl at julie’s house warming party two weeks ago and I have been interested in her and getting to open up my mind to her. But I heard that my best friend ,
Toby likes her last Friday.  So,  I was torn between love and friendship. It’s pretty difficult to take that on board.
>> 
Um....I met a girl at Julie’s house warming party two weeks ago and I have been interested in opening up to her. But I heard that my best friend Toby likes her last Friday So I was torn between love and friendship. It’s pretty difficult to take that on board.

A: Poor my boy, So have you decided whether you progress with her?
>>  My poor boy. So have you decided whether to tell her how you exactly feel?

B: I will put on the back burner and move away from the situation and they can crack on.
>> 
I will put on the back burner and move away from the situation while they can crack on.

A: Oh that’s amazing things of you to do.
>> Oh that\'s amazing of you to do!

B: That’s why I might have been so quite for a couple of days. I needed some time to think about it.
>> Correct!
Or> quiet

A: Yes. Absolutely, I understand you.
>> Correct!
Or>> Yes, absolutely. I understand.

B: Thank you for understanding me. How is it going with your dating?
>> Correct!
Or>> 
Thanks for understanding. How is it going with dating?/ How is it going with your date?


A: I don’t know. She definitely likes me and I do but I think she still guards up to me. I feel like she puts wall up against me.
>>  
I don’t know. She definitely likes me and I do too but I think she still guards me up. I feel like she puts up a wall against me.


B: Oh.. so have you guys talked about that?
>> Correct!
Or>> Oh, so have you guys talked about that?/ Oh, so have you talked about the matter?

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