daily evening life
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I'm sorry I couldn't answer your call the previous evening.
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I was very upset yesterday because my father and I had a fight.
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The problem was relating my job. My father didn't have same solution like me.
>>The problem was related to my job.My father and I
didn뭪 have same decision.
In the end, I made a rude to my father. So,
I reflect on my conduct.
>>In the end.I become rude to my father.So,It reflected
t in my conduct.
But don't be worry about that. I feel better
than yesterday.
>>But don뭪 worry about that. I feel better than yesterday.
Anyway, I'm cleanig a dirt now.
>>anyway,I뭢 cleaning dirt now.
I'm enjoying cleaning my house. Because I can't avoid the work.
>>Cleaning.Because I can뭪 avoid to work.
I think the problem is not a problem
according to how I'm thinking.
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My room' s theme is antique. I wanna decorate my room looks like princess room.
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I have a romance to be a classic and beautiful woman.
>>I have romance to classic and a beautiful woman
I ask you for help. I request you that
correct my expression right and fully.
>>I ask your hel.May I request you to correct my expression fully?
I really want to speak English like you. I hope to speak my heart to you.
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