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2010-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 lina

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm sorry I couldn't answer your call the previous evening. I was very upset yesterday because my father and I had a fight. The problem was relating my job. My father didn't have same solution like me. In the end, I made a rude to my father. So, I reflect on my conduct. But don't be worry about that. I feel better than yesterday. Anyway, I'm cleanig a dirt now. I'm enjoying claening my house. Because I can't avoid the work. I think the problem is not a problem according to how I'm thinking. My room' s theme is antique. I wanna decorate my room looks like princess room. I have a romance to be a classic and beautiful woman. I ask you for help. I request you that correct my expression right and fully.I really want to speak English like you. I hope to speak my heart to you.

강사 첨삭

Hello Priscella,Yes,Don't problem your problem.Let your problem problem you.That's what I learn in a saying..kkk Yes,I will correct your sentences.Please do check your daily evaluation in our website for our previous class I did several grammar correction and all were written there.Cleaning and decorating,is very enjoyable. You never notice that the time pass on you already.I will correct your sentenecs right after you spoke would that be okay?or since we only have ten minutes would you rather like that I'll write it down on your daily evaluation?SMILE!

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I'm sorry I couldn't answer your call the previous evening.

>>Correct
I was very upset yesterday because my father and I had a fight.

>>Correct
The problem was relating my job. My father didn't have same solution like me.

>>The problem was related to my job.My father and I didn뭪 have same decision.
In the end, I made a rude to my father. So, I reflect on my conduct.

>>In the end.I become rude to my father.So,It reflected t in my conduct.
But don't be worry about that. I feel better than yesterday.

>>But don뭪 worry about that. I feel better than yesterday.

Anyway, I'm cleanig a dirt now.

>>anyway,I뭢 cleaning dirt now.

I'm enjoying cleaning my house. Because I can't avoid the work.

>>Cleaning.Because I can뭪 avoid to work.
I think the problem is not a problem according to how I'm thinking.

>>Correct
My room' s theme is antique. I wanna decorate my room looks like princess room.

>>Correct
I have a romance to be a classic and beautiful woman.

>>I have romance to classic and a beautiful woman
I ask you for help. I request you that correct my expression right and fully.

>>I ask your hel.May I request you to correct my expression fully?

I really want to speak English like you. I hope to speak my heart to you.

>>Correct


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