Daily homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Friday Sharon ^^
What makes 'a house' into 'a home'? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
lt make 'a house' by cozy interior design.
Our house have a lot of plant.
lt's very good to comfortable eyes and house atmosphere.
also we have raise some vegetables in small farm rooftop.
sometimes we use this material to make food.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday!
Good job on your composition.
I hope you keep expressing yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
lt make \'a house\' by cozy interior design.
>> A house becomes a home through cozy interior design.
Our house have a lot of plant.
>> Our house has a lot of plants.
lt\'s very good to comfortable eyes and house atmosphere.
>> lt makes the atmosphere of the house comfortable and easy on the eyes.
also we have raise some vegetables in small farm rooftop.
>> We also have a rooftop garden where we grow some vegetables.
sometimes we use this material to make food.
>> Sometimes, we cook these vegetables for our meals.
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