Daily homework

Hi [이름]!

I didn\'t know that you are applying to be a cabin crew member.

I wish you good luck.

Take note of the corrections below.

Ask me if you have any questions.

I hope that my suggestions help.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I\'ve always been passionate about customer services.

>> Correct
then, l usually tried to do something.

>> I have tried to prepare myself for this job for a long time now.
l have studying chinese language 1 years.

>>  I have been studying the Chinese language for a year.
It is possible to conversation your chinese customer as well.

>> I know that I can converse with Chinese customers.
also l love do yoga.

>> I also love doing yoga.
I learned how to relieve stress while learning yoga.

>>  I have learned how to relieve stress while doing yoga.
My positive personality is going to match your company image.

>> Correct

I\'ve used to your airline 3 times.

>> I\'ve used your airline company 3 times before.
when l used that lt was so perpect.

>> It was a perfect customer experience for me.
enjoyable atmosphere, no delayed and kindly cabin crews.

>> The atmosphere was fun and there were no delays and the cabin crew members were all kind.
So I would like to serve these good things to your customers if I work for your airline.

>> I would like to provide such great service to your customers if given the chance to work for your airline company.