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2018-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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hi sharon ! always thank you for help out class. see you soon ~^^ Writing Exercise: Do you manage to sleep as much as you need? Why or why not? Answer in 5 sentences or more. l usually manage to sleep very well As much as other people do. l try to get up early if l don't go to work. lt is very important for my daily routine. by doing this, l can finish any works what l want to accomplish. by the ways sometimes my cellphone cause me to disturb sleeping.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

You are always welcome.

Keep working hard!

I\'ll call you tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

l usually manage to sleep very well As much as other people do.

>> l usually manage to sleep very well as much as other people do.
l try to get up early if l don\'t go to work.

>> l try to get up early even if l don\'t have to go to work.
lt is very important for my daily routine.

>> Correct
by doing this, l can finish any works what l want to accomplish.

>> By doing this, l can finish all the work what l want to accomplish.
by the ways sometimes my cellphone cause me to disturb sleeping.

>> I also want to say that sometimes, my cellphone disturbs my sleep.

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