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2018-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Happy friday Elly! Have a great weekend. See you On Monday :) HOMEWORK: Would you always care to fulfill the requests of your family and friends? Please explain. I often care to fullfill the requests from them. Whenever possible. Such as doing house chores and fixing something. After ever fullfill that l was so proud. and l can requests them when l need to help.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you again!

Great job in giving good answers!

Please keep up the good work!

Talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

Happy friday Elly!

>>Happy Friday, Elly!

Have a great weekend.

CORRECT!

or>>May you enjoy a wonderful weekend!

See you On Monday :)

>>See you on Monday!

or>>Talk to you again on Monday!

HOMEWORK: Would you always care to fulfil the requests of your family and friends? Please explain.

I often care to fullfill the requests from them.

 Whenever possible.

>>I often fulfill their requests whenever possible.

Such as doing house chores and fixing something.

CORRECT!

or>>Such as fixing something or other house chores.

After ever fullfill that l was so proud.

>>After fulfilling their every request, l feel very proud of myself.

and l can requests them when l need to help. 

>>And l can also request something from them, when l need help. 

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