Daily homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you again!
Great job in giving good answers!
Please keep up the good work!
Talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
Happy friday Elly!
>>Happy Friday, Elly!
Have a great weekend.
CORRECT!
or>>May you enjoy a wonderful weekend!
See you On Monday :)
>>See you on Monday!
or>>Talk to you again on Monday!
HOMEWORK: Would you always care to fulfil the requests of your family and friends? Please explain.
I often care to fullfill the requests from them.
Whenever possible.
>>I often fulfill their requests whenever possible.
Such as doing house chores and fixing something.
CORRECT!
or>>Such as fixing something or other house chores.
After ever fullfill that l was so proud.
>>After fulfilling their every request, l feel very proud of myself.
and l can requests them when l need to help.
>>And l can also request something from them, when l need help.
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