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2018-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Hello Elly ! May we enjoy a nice holiday : ) See ya ! HOMEWORK: When do you usually need a hand? Please explain. l can't usually handling my laptop problems. Also, l'm not good at compter ability. A few days ago, l had problem in my laptop. I asked my friend for helping and got information about the cause and repair center.

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Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework.
Kingly go over my corrections.
Happy holiday!
Hello Elly!
>> Correct.
May we enjoy a nice holiday : )
>> Correct.
See ya!
>> Correct.
HOMEWORK: When do you usually need a hand? Please explain.
l can\'t usually handling my laptop problems.
>> I can\'t usual handle my laptop problems.
Also, l\'m not good at compter ability.
>> Also, I am not computer literate.
A few days ago, l had problem in my laptop.
>> A few days ago, I had a problem with my laptop.
I asked my friend for helping and got information about the cause and repair center
>> Did you mean: I asked my friend to help me in finding a repair center to check the problem of my laptop.

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