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2017-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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I am working for a company but it's interantional company so it has diffrent cultulre comparing to korean company there are good thing and bad thing but my company is more suitable for me actually im having trouble doing my job because i took my job after my prdecessor quit so i didnt take over her job totally so i have to do my job by my self but my manager or other co'woker treat me like i know the job exactly but I can say all the time i don't tknow so it's a really struglle for doing my job each day but i know i can do very well someday another proble is that i can't speak in egllish fluently but there is many chance to speak or read english before i came this company i was very confident for speaking in english but after i start this job i don't consider iam good at english because speaking in english in company is quite formal thing anyway i have decided to take this classs and write diary this page every day i hope it makes me good at english

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Happy evening! ^^


Thank you for sharing this with me. :)

I appreciate you being honest. 

I hope I would be of  help to improve your English skills. 

We can do this together. :)

Please go over the corrections and the way I rewrote your sentences.

The capitalization and the punctuation marks are very important.  :)

See you! ^^


T. Glenda



I am working for a company
but it\'s interantional company so it has diffrent cultulre comparing to korean company

>> I am working for an international company, so it has different culture compared to a Korean company.
 there are good thing and bad thing
but my company is more suitable for me

>> There are good things and bad things but my company is more suitable for me.
 actually im having trouble doing my job
because i took my job after my prdecessor quit

>> Actually, I\'m having trouble doing my job because I took it after my predecessor quit.
 so i didnt take over her job totally
so i have to do my job by my self 

>> So I didn\'t totally take over her job but I have to it by myself.
 but my manager or other co\'woker treat me like i know the job exactly 

>> My manager and my co-workers treat me like I know everything about the job responsibilities.
 but I can say all the time i don\'t tknow 

>> But all I can say is I don\'t know.
 so it\'s a really struglle for doing my job each day
but i know i can do very well someday

>> So, it\'s really a struggle doing this job everyday but I know that I can do it well someday.
 another proble is that i can\'t speak in egllish fluently
but there is many chance to speak or read english 

>> Another problem is, I can\'t speak English fluently but there are many chances for me to speak and read in English.
 before i came this company i was very confident for speaking in english 

>> Before I came to this company, I was very confident in speaking English.
 but after i start this job i don\'t consider iam good at english
because speaking in english in company is quite formal thing 

>> So, after I started this job, I can\'t consider myself as good in English because speaking in English in the company is in a formal way.
 anyway i have decided to take this classs and write diary this page every day i hope it makes me good at english

>> Anyway, I decided to take this class and write a diary everyday. I hope it will help make my English better.

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