daily note
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Happy evening! ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me. :)
I appreciate you being honest.
I hope I would be of help to improve your English skills.
We can do this together. :)
Please go over the corrections and the way I rewrote your sentences.
The capitalization and the punctuation marks are very important. :)
See you! ^^
T. Glenda
I am working for a company
but it\'s interantional company so it has diffrent cultulre comparing to korean company
>> I am working for an international company, so it has different culture compared to a Korean company.
there are good thing and bad thing
but my company is more suitable for me
>> There are good things and bad things but my company is more suitable for me.
actually im having trouble doing my job
because i took my job after my prdecessor quit
>> Actually, I\'m having trouble doing my job because I took it after my predecessor quit.
so i didnt take over her job totally
so i have to do my job by my self
>> So I didn\'t totally take over her job but I have to it by myself.
but my manager or other co\'woker treat me like i know the job exactly
>> My manager and my co-workers treat me like I know everything about the job responsibilities.
but I can say all the time i don\'t tknow
>> But all I can say is I don\'t know.
so it\'s a really struglle for doing my job each day
but i know i can do very well someday
>> So, it\'s really a struggle doing this job everyday but I know that I can do it well someday.
another proble is that i can\'t speak in egllish fluently
but there is many chance to speak or read english
>> Another problem is, I can\'t speak English fluently but there are many chances for me to speak and read in English.
before i came this company i was very confident for speaking in english
>> Before I came to this company, I was very confident in speaking English.
but after i start this job i don\'t consider iam good at english
because speaking in english in company is quite formal thing
>> So, after I started this job, I can\'t consider myself as good in English because speaking in English in the company is in a formal way.
anyway i have decided to take this classs and write diary this page every day i hope it makes me good at english
>> Anyway, I decided to take this class and write a diary everyday. I hope it will help make my English better.
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