Daily routine
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I\'m a college student majoring in journalism and marketing. I was about to be a senior this year, but I decided to take a gap year for my internship. So now I\'m doing my internship at the AI-tech team in the cosmetic company. I wake up at 7, go to the work by subway by 8:30 and eat breakfast in the cafeteria. Then I have lunch with my colleagues at 12, take a break for an hour, and work again till 6. After the work, I meet my friends or go for a workout. These days I\'m willing to achieve self development, so I started english conversation classes every 3 times a week.
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Daily routine
I\'m a college student majoring in journalism and marketing.
>> or: I\'m pursuing a college degree with a double major in journalism and marketing.
I was about to be a senior this year, but I decided to take a gap year for my internship.
>> I could have been a senior student this year, but I opted to take a break and prioritize my internship.
So now I\'m doing my internship at the AI-tech team in the cosmetic company.
>> So I’m currently interning with the AI-tech team at a cosmetics company.
I wake up at 7, go to the work by subway by 8:30 and eat breakfast in the cafeteria.
>> Every morning, I wake up at 7, take the subway to work by 8:30, and have breakfast at the cafeteria.
Then I have lunch with my colleagues at 12, take a break for an hour, and work again till 6.
>> At 12, I have lunch with my colleagues, take a one-hour break, and then continue working until 6.
After the work, I meet my friends or go for a workout.
>> After work, I either catch up with friends or hit the gym for a workout.
These days I\'m willing to achieve self development, so I started english conversation classes every 3 times a week.
>> These days, I\'m committed to self-improvement and have started attending English conversation classes three times weekly.
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