Daily schedule 2
학생이 쓴 원문
In the afternoon, I take a lunch at 12 p.m.
And I start again working. I generally finish 8 p.m. I arrive in my house at 8:30 p.m. and then I show, take rest and watch tv. I sleep at 1 a.m.
Have a good day. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi, thanks for sharing this daily schedule with me! Wow, much of a routine everyday, huh? Same actually goes for me, our difference is just with the time! Kk. Well thanks for such a lovely composition and see you again in class!
-T. Joey -
In the afternoon, I take a lunch at 12 p.m.
>>> In the afternoon, I take lunch at 12 noon.
And I start again working.
>>> And I start working again.
I generally finish 8 p.m.
>>> I generally finish at 8 P.M.
I arrive in my house at 8:30 p.m. and then I show, take rest and watch tv.
>>> I arrive in my house at 8:30 P.M. and then I shower, take a rest and watch TV.
I sleep at 1 a.m.
>>> I sleep at 1 A.M.
Have a good day. ^^
>>> Correct
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