Daily schedule 2

2011-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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In the afternoon, I take a lunch at 12 p.m. And I start again working. I generally finish 8 p.m. I arrive in my house at 8:30 p.m. and then I show, take rest and watch tv. I sleep at 1 a.m. Have a good day. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi, thanks for sharing this daily schedule with me! Wow, much of a routine everyday, huh? Same actually goes for me, our difference is just with the time! Kk. Well thanks for such a lovely composition and see you again in class! -T. Joey -   In the afternoon, I take a lunch at 12 p.m. >>> In the afternoon, I take lunch at 12 noon. And I start again working. >>> And I start working again.  I generally finish 8 p.m. >>> I generally finish at 8 P.M. I arrive in my house at 8:30 p.m. and then I show, take rest and watch tv. >>> I arrive in my house at 8:30 P.M.  and then I shower, take a rest and watch TV.  I sleep at 1 a.m. >>> I sleep at 1 A.M. Have a good day. ^^ >>> Correct  

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