Daily schedule
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm to talk about everyday routine life.
I wake up 6 o'clock in the morning to wash clothes and be prepared to work.Then,I'm ready to call to speak English for 20 minutes.
At 6:50, I call with my English teacher for 10 minutes.
Then, I eat breakfast.Usually I eat rice and two kinds of dishes and dessert. I start home at 7:15.Rush hour is usually 50 minutes by complex subway. Regular business hours are 9:00 to 18:00.
In the morning, I take a business meeting and process meeting and
in the afternoon, as supervisor I direct a job in construction site.
I do to an appointment or personal hobbies in the evening.
I come back home at 10 p.m.
At home,I listen to music to relax and to read a book.
I sleeps in before 12:00 for tomorrow.
This is my daily schedule.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow! You seem to have a busy daily routine. It sounds really nice and exciting. I hope tomorrow will be a great day for you.
T. Kelly
I'm to talk about everyday routine life.
>> I'll talk about my daily routine.I wake up 6 o'clock in the morning to wash clothes and be prepared to work.
>> I wake up at 6 o'clock in the morning to wash clothes and prepare for work.
Then,I'm ready to call to speak English for 20 minutes.
>> Then, I get ready to take your call to speak English for 20 minutes.At 6:50, I call with my English teacher for 10 minutes.
>> At 6:50, I talk with my English teacher for 10 minutes.Then, I eat breakfast.
>>Correct
Usually I eat rice and two kinds of dishes and dessert.
>>Correct
I start home at 7:15.
>>I leave home at 7:15 am.
Rush hour is usually 50 minutes by complex subway.
>> Rush hour usually takes 50 minutes by complex subway.
Regular business hours are 9:00 to 18:00.
>>CorrectIn the morning, I take a business meeting and process meeting andin the afternoon, as supervisor I direct a job in construction site.
>> In the morning, I take a business meeting and a process meeting andin the afternoon, as a supervisor, I direct a job in the construction site.I do to an appointment or personal hobbies in the evening.
>> I have an appointment or personal hobbies in the evening.I come back home at 10 p.m.
>>CorrectAt home,I listen to music to relax and to read a book.
>> At home, I listen to music and read a book to relax.
I sleeps in before 12:00 for tomorrow.
>> I sleep before 12:00.
This is my daily schedule.
>>Correct
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