Daily schedule

2011-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I'm to talk about everyday routine life. I wake up 6 o'clock in the morning to wash clothes and be prepared to work.Then,I'm ready to call to speak English for 20 minutes. At 6:50, I call with my English teacher for 10 minutes. Then, I eat breakfast.Usually I eat rice and two kinds of dishes and dessert. I start home at 7:15.Rush hour is usually 50 minutes by complex subway. Regular business hours are 9:00 to 18:00. In the morning, I take a business meeting and process meeting and in the afternoon, as supervisor I direct a job in construction site. I do to an appointment or personal hobbies in the evening. I come back home at 10 p.m. At home,I listen to music to relax and to read a book. I sleeps in before 12:00 for tomorrow. This is my daily schedule.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wow! You seem to have a busy daily routine. It sounds really nice and exciting. I hope tomorrow will be a great day for you. T. Kelly   I'm to talk about everyday routine life. >> I'll talk about my daily routine.I wake up 6 o'clock in the morning to wash clothes and be prepared to work. >> I wake up at 6 o'clock in the morning to wash clothes and prepare for work. Then,I'm ready to call to speak English for 20 minutes. >> Then, I get ready to take your call to speak English for 20 minutes.At 6:50, I call with my English teacher for 10 minutes. >> At 6:50, I talk with my English teacher for 10 minutes.Then, I eat breakfast. >>Correct Usually I eat rice and two kinds of dishes and dessert. >>Correct I start home at 7:15. >>I leave home at 7:15 am. Rush hour is usually 50 minutes by complex subway. >> Rush hour usually takes 50 minutes by complex subway. Regular business hours are 9:00 to 18:00. >>CorrectIn the morning, I take a business meeting and process meeting andin the afternoon, as supervisor I direct a job in construction site. >> In the morning, I take a business meeting and a process meeting andin the afternoon, as a supervisor, I direct a job in the construction site.I do to an appointment or personal hobbies in the evening. >> I have an appointment or personal hobbies in the evening.I come back home at 10 p.m. >>CorrectAt home,I listen to music to relax and to read a book. >> At home, I listen to music and read a book to relax. I sleeps in before 12:00 for tomorrow. >> I sleep before 12:00. This is my daily schedule. >>Correct

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