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2020-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

학생이 쓴 원문

I was a student who doesn\'t like writing a diary. On vacation I still had to write a journal every single day. But I didn\'t do anything until a week left. So I had to write every writing for 7days.

강사 첨삭

Too lazy! I think we are the same! haha Talk to you again in class. ^_^ 

I was a student who doesn\'t like writing a diary.
>> Correct. 

On vacation I still had to write a journal every single day.
>> When I was on vacation\'s before I still had to write a journal every single day.

But I didn\'t do anything until a week left.
>> But, I didn\'t do anything until one week before we go back to school. 

So I had to write every writing for 7days.
>> That is why I had to write for 7 days. 

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