Dairy
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I watched Ratatouille in school.
I watched it secret. The movie was vary interesting. Ordinarily I don’t like rat. But I felt so sorry in the movie.
Tomorrow, at last friday!!!! Friday is my favorite day of week. Because my favorite videos are upload!!
I can’t wait to see it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Yu [이름]!
Thanks for making your diary today. Do this as your routine so you will be able to practice English more often not only through speaking, but also writing. ^^
Thanks for making your diary today. Do this as your routine so you will be able to practice English more often not only through speaking, but also writing. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Today, I watched the movie, Ratatouille in school.
I watched it secret.
>>I watched it secretly.
The movie was vary interesting.
>>The movie was very interesting.
Ordinarily I don’t like rat.
>> Normally, I don\'t like rats.
But I felt so sorry in the movie.
>> But I felt so sorry for them in the movie.
Tomorrow, at last friday!!!!
>> Tomorrow is at last Friday again!
Friday is my favorite day of week. Because my favorite videos are upload!!
>>Friday is my favorite day of the week because my favorite videos are uploaded.
I can’t wait to see it.
>>I can\'t wait to see them.
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