Dairy😶
학생이 쓴 원문
Yeaterday, my mom and youngerbrother went to seoul.
So my youngerssister and me were very busy.
I made lunch and dinner, cleaned house.
Today my mom and youngerbrother back to home
They said, ther went to 63building
I want to go there😭
강사 첨삭
Hello Yu [이름]!
Nice one in doing your homework. Check your spelling when writing and put some spaces between words as well. Read your corrections. ^^
~T. Maine
>> Yesterday, my mom and younger brother went to Seoul.
So my youngerssister and me were very busy.
>> So, my younger sister and I were very busy.
I made lunch and dinner, cleaned house.
>>I made lunch and dinner and then cleaned the house.
Today my mom and youngerbrother back to home
>> Today, my mom and my younger brother went back home.
They said, ther went to 63building
I want to go there😭
>> They told me that they went to the building I want to go to.
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