Daliy homework
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How do you feel about the use of animals for medical research? Explain your answer.
l really have negative feedback to use of animals for medical reseach.
They have theirs right. and must have.
Also, we should protect rigths.
There are many cases where human selfish use hurts them.
We Needs to be improved.
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l really have negative feedback to use of animals for medical reseach.
>> I really have negative feedback about the use of animals for medical research.
They have theirs right. and must have.
>> They have their rights.
Also, we should protect rigths.
>> Also, we should protect their rights.
There are many cases where human selfish use hurts them.
>> There are many cases where selfish humans hurt them.
We Needs to be improved.
>> It needs to be improved.
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