Dance
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People of different ages, sizes, and forms can stay in shape by dancing.
Dancing can improve heart and lung health.
There are several physical and mental health advantages, such as enhanced physical fitness, muscular strength, and endurance.
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I danced at school on yesterday
>>> I danced at school yesterday.
I am dancing now Le serapim\'s easy song I study a dance Le serapim\'s dance.
>>> Now, I am learning the dance of Le Sserafim\'s song called \'Easy\'.
Le Serapim dance is a bit difficult.
>>> This Le Sserafim\'s dance is a bit difficult.
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