dances

2015-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sarah

학생이 쓴 원문

I am so excited to learn ballet today! Baket is too difficult! I only ant to learn dance I also want to learn to learn the Spanish dance called Tango That`s baethful! Do you want to learn boogie too? Yes~~

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],


Thank you for doing your homework today.

I hope you will get a chance to learn hip hop

dance in the future. :)


Teacher Sarah


I am so excited to learn ballet today!
>> CORRECT
Baket is too difficult!

>> Ballet is too difficult!
 I only ant to learn dance
>> I want to learn how to dance.
I also want to learn to learn the Spanish dance called Tango
>> I also want to learn the Spanish dance called Tango.
That`s baethful!

>> That\'s beautiful!
 Do you want to learn boogie too?
>> CORRECT
Yes~~

>> Yes, I do.

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