Danger or safety transportation
학생이 쓴 원문
I think ship is very dangerous. Because if that meet wind shipper is dye. Subway is safe because tunule protect subway.
강사 첨삭
HI, [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I am also scared of ships and the ocean, but it\'s nice going to the beach. Please stay safe when traveling. See you!
--Teacher Anji
I think ship is very dangerous. Because if that meet wind shipper is dye. Subway is safe because tunule protect subway.
>> I think ships are very dangerous because if they meet strong winds, ships can be in danger. Subways are safe because tunnels protect them.
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