Dangerous thing
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the most dangerous thing in your home for an elderly person? How can it be made less dangerous?
There is a running machine in my home.
It is not dangerous for me.
However, it is dangerous for grandparents.
I think that I should leave a note using Postit not to use except me.
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What is the most dangerous thing in your home for an elderly person? How can it be made less dangerous?There is a running machine in my home.
>> There is a running machine at home. It is not dangerous for me.
>> Correct.However, it is dangerous for grandparents.
>> However, it is dangerous for my grandparents. I think that I should leave a note using Postit not to use except me.
>> I think I should leave a note saying \"not to use it except for me\" using PostIt.
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