date.12.23

Hi there [이름]!

Thanks for your composition.

I admire you for wanting to improve your skills.
Keep up the good work! I hope that you will have a great holiday.
Merry Christmas, too! I can\'t wait to hear your stories.

Please explain your sentences further in class. ^^

I hope I was able to understand those correctly.

See you on Monday.
Take care.
Teacher Nina

I took an examination about fire direction in the morning.

>> correct

fire direction is command to cannon. 

>> Did you mean: Fire direction is a command to operate a cannon. (Please explain this sentence in class. ^^ )
Helping aim at a mark is fire direction.

>> Did you mean: Aiming a mark is fire direction. (Please explain this sentence in class. ^^ )

Fire direction is a lot to study!!! so I had a lot to study.

>> Did you mean: Fire direction has a lot of lessons so I have to study hard.

>> OR: Fire directions is a difficult subject so I have to study hard.
But today examination is fail...

>> But I failed in that examination today.

Fire direction examination damands team mission!. and We are fail!!! ㅠㅠ

>> Fire direction examination has a lot of demands, it is a mission of the team and we failed.
Four team competed and we are fourth!. hahahahaha

>> Four teams competed and we are fourth.
>> OR: Four teams competed and we got the fourth place.
I announced about read book.

>> I announced to read the book.

I announced successfully haha.

>> I announced it successfully.

I received a hand.

>> correct
Tomorrow I will go to seoul.

>> correct (Capitalization: Seoul ^.^)

>> OR: I will go to Seoul tomorrow.

I will take a monthly holiday! hahahahah

>> I will take a holiday for one month.

happy day so maybe I delay this class.
>> It is a happy day for me so I might delay this class. 
Happy Christmas! Nina!!

>> Merry Christmas Nina.