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2011-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Today, I did a date with the last blind-date partner. His name is Seo Daniel SeungWan Seo is his family name and SeungWan is his korea name. Also, Daniel is his English name because he was born in U.S. Although he was born in U.S., he can't speak English well because he came back korea as soon as he was born. He is 3 years older than me. Also, I think that he is a kind and warm person. We ate dinner together at the Italian restaurant in Myeong-dong which is the most famous places in Seoul. After that, we drank coffee and talked about ourselves seriously. I could know who he is and I think he did, too. Although I came back home very lately, I had a great time.

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[이름]!             I hope that you really enjoyed your date with Daniel. I think that he is a good person. I am just basing it with your story. Do you think that you will have another date? Haha…. T.Faye   Here are your corrections: Today, I did a date with the last blind-date partner.>>I had a date with my last blind date partner today.His name is Seo Daniel SeungWan >>Correct!Seo is his family name and SeungWan is his korea name. >> Seo is his family name and SeungWan is his korean name.Also, Daniel is his English name because he was born in U.S. >>Correct!Although he was born in U.S., he can't speak English well because he came back korea as soon as he was born.>>Although he was born in the US, he can’t speak English well because they came back to Korea after he was born.He is 3 years older than me. >>Correct!Also, I think that he is a kind and warm person.>>Correct!We ate dinner together at the Italian restaurant in Myeong-dong which is the most famous places in Seoul. >> We ate dinner together at the Italian restaurant in Myeong-dong which is one of  the most famous places in Seoul.After that, we drank coffee and talked about ourselves seriously. >> After that, we drank coffee and talked about our personal things. >> After that, we drank coffee and talked about serious issues in our life.I could know who he is and I think he did, too.>>We tried to know something about each other.Although I came back home very lately, I had a great time. >>Although I went home very late, I had a great time.

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