dating with my boyfriend.

I met my boyfriend. It takes long time too meet him again. because After last meeting, we had some trouble. whereas i was worried about that he might be anger with my hairdo, but he told me "It's ok. but don't cut anymore.~" we were dying with hunger. so we went to a famous restaurant. but sadly there was full of seat. so we despaired and went to the other restaurant. Luckily there was just one empty table. it was famous for kimchijjigae.~ we ate until our stomach were full. delicious food and my boy friend made me happy.~

[이름], I had fun reading about your date. You are getting better at writing most especially with the theme/topic and how you chronologically arrange your ideas.  I made some corrections with the structures, though. With more practice I’m pretty sure you can get the whole idea of writing. I hope you have a great day! XOXO, Jenny Here are the corrections: I met my boyfriend. >>Correct.  It takes long time too meet him again. because After last meeting, we had some trouble. >>It took us a long time to meet again because we had a misunderstanding the last time we met.  whereas i was worried about that he might be anger with my hairdo, but he told me "It's ok. but don't cut anymore. >> Whereas I was worried that he might be angry with my new hairdo, he just told me, “It’s ok, but you should not cut it short anymore.” we were dying with hunger. so we went to a famous restaurant. >>We almost died of hunger so we went to a famous restaurant.  but sadly there was full of seat. so we despaired and went to the other restaurant. >> Sadly, the restaurant was full, so we decided to go to the other restaurant.  Luckily there was just one empty table. >>Fortunately, there was one empty table.  it was famous for kimchijjigae. >>That restaurant is famous for kimchijigae.  we ate until our stomach were full. >> We ate until our stomachs were full.  delicious food and my boy friend made me happy. >>Delicious food and my boyfriend make me happy.