day 1, Homework 2024 year October 29day
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework Title :
What\'s the most memorable vacation you\'re had
This is a answer :
I had most memorable vacation is when I go to the OSAKA in Japan with my son
We were stay in hotel of five star, It\'s very easy. Also we eat many favorite food Sashimi, fish [이름]bab and steak.
Breakfast is eat in hotel restaurant. and we have show around OSAKA city.
And we was in OSAKA show night around two evening, and back home, t[이름]k you.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! I\'m glad that you enjoyed Osaka. It\'s one of my dream places to go as well. I want to see the Osaka castle. and eat authentic okonomiyaki. T[이름]k you for these wonderful sentences. See you!
--Teacher Anji
This is a answer :
>> This is my answer:
I had most memorable vacation is when I go to the OSAKA in Japan with my son.
I had most memorable vacation is when I go to the OSAKA in Japan with my son.
>> My most memorable vacation was when I went to Osaka, Japan with my son.
We were stay in hotel of five star,
We were stay in hotel of five star,
>> We stayed in a 5-star hotel.
It\'s very easy.
>> CORRECT
Also we eat many favorite food Sashimi, fish [이름]bab and steak.
>> We also ate our favorite food such as sashimi, fish [이름]bap, and steak.
Breakfast is eat in hotel restaurant.
Breakfast is eat in hotel restaurant.
>> We ate breakfast at the hotel restaurant.
and we have show around OSAKA city.
>> And we went sightseeing around Osaka.
And we was in OSAKA show night around two evening, and back home, t[이름]k you.
And we was in OSAKA show night around two evening, and back home, t[이름]k you.
>> We were in Osaka night show for about 2 nights, then we went back home. T[이름]k you.
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