day 1_ homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: How does your family decide who does various chores around the house? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
lt is decide to who don't work or go on a work later.
mainly our house chores fix each other.
mother and i we usually do chores more.
these days l spend time in home all day.
so l try to do most chores.
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lt is decide to who don\'t work or go on a work later.
>> We decide that the people who don\'t have to go to work must do the chores.
mainly our house chores fix each other.
>> It is mainly about fixing things in the house.
mother and i we usually do chores more.
>> My mother and I do most of the chores.
these days l spend time in home all day.
>> These days, I spend a lot of time at home.
so l try to do most chores.
>> That\'s why I try to do most of the chores.
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