day 2, Homework 2024 year October 30 day
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework title :
1. : Where in Korea do you recommend me to visit ?
1-1 : I recommend you to Insadong in seoul Korea
2. : Why should I visit there ?
2-1 : becouse there is many tourist visit and small antique store
3, : What activtis can I do there ?
3- 1 : You can there will be tried Korea food and buy small cute antique
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! T[이름]k you for your recommendation. I hope to visit Korea in the future. And I would love to meet you there, too. Good job on this homework. See you!
--Teacher Anji
1. : Where in Korea do you recommend me to visit ?
1-1 : I recommend you to Insadong in seoul Korea
1-1 : I recommend you to Insadong in seoul Korea
>> I recommend Insadong in Seoul Korea for you.
2. : Why should I visit there ?
2-1 : becouse there is many tourist visit and small antique store
2. : Why should I visit there ?
2-1 : becouse there is many tourist visit and small antique store
>> Because there are many tourists visiting, and there are small antique stores.
3, : What activtis can I do there ?
3- 1 : You can there will be tried Korea food and buy small cute antique.
3, : What activtis can I do there ?
3- 1 : You can there will be tried Korea food and buy small cute antique.
>> You can try Korean food and buy small, cute antiques there.
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