day 3_ homework

Hi [이름]!

I\'s so much fun to read your composition for today.

I\'d love to learn how to swim myself.

I think we both love the water very much.

Please take note of the corrections below.

Focus on word usage.

I\'ll talk to you in a bit.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

l\'d like to try do swimming professionally.

>> I\'d like to take formal swimming lessons.
 because l never took a swimming lesson before.

>> This is because I have never taken a swimming lesson before.
 if l take to learn that l can loose weight and lt\'s very helpful my self.

>> If I take these classes, I can lose weight and it would be really helpful to myself.
 also l love to pool and beach.

>> I love the pool and the beach.
 so l hope enjoy there by improve my swimming skills.

>> I hope to enjoy these places with my swimming skills.