Day 3 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
To answer your queries, I am from the Philippines.
I am also calling you here in the Philippines.
To be honest, I have never been to South Korea and I hope to visit your country someday!
Talk to you later^^ Thank you :)
Q. What is your favorite item of clothing from your wardrobe? Why?
A. What a interesting question ! (cause I like clothes :p)
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Hmmm... My wardrobe.
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I have several brand\'s item.
>>I have items from many brands.
So, I have standard what I made.
>>So I have the standard I made.
For example, I like denim jeans but I don\'t like stretch fabric in jeans.
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So, I prefer 100% cotton fabric when I buy jeans.
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My favorite denim jean is APC.
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Also, I like japanese brand and american brand.
>>I also like Japanese and American brands.
Actually, I am not wearing fancy style (fancy look).
>>In fact, I don\'t have a fancy style.
So, I usually wearing casual style.
>>So, I usually wear casual style.
And I am very interested in military wear (19th vintage wear).
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Sometimes I searching military wear on internet. [Engineered garments] , [brooks brothers] , [ralph lauren] , [J.press] these are the most favorite brands to me.
>>Sometimes I search for military wear, Brooks Brothers, Ralph Lauren, and J. Press. These are my favorite brands.
Can I ask one question ?
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Miss fiona, where are you come from ?
>> Miss. [Name], where are you come from? (Capitalize names and other proper nouns)
I heard english have different accent by area.
>>I heard that English has different accents by area.
And what makes you come to korea?
>>And what made you come to Korea?
Tell me if you okay ^^
>>Tell me if you don\'t mind.^^
Have a good day and let\'s talk at 9:10
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