day 4_ homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday [이름]!
I\'m glad you\'re coming out strong as ever.
Thank you for your composition today.
This will set as a bar for the whole week.
Take note of the corrections!
I\'ll talk to you later.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
l saw a news article that it will develop eye water for eyesight fastly
>> l saw a news article that they will develop eye liquid to improve eyesight quickly.
so, l\'m expected the eye water.
>> I\'m really looking forward to this liquid being invented.
l got a LASEK surgery 2years ago.
>> l got a LASEK surgery 2 years ago.
however these days my eyesight is getting worse.
>> However these days my eyesight is getting worse.
l\'m really worry about that.
>> I\'m really worried about that.
l think those reason is that always use phone, computer and reading books so many time.
>> l think this is caused by me always using my phone, computer and reading books for a long time.
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