Day 4 homework

2019-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

학생이 쓴 원문

Miss. [Name], I am so sorry if I made you feel bad cause I asked where are you came from. I just asked with no reason at all. I just wanted sharing informations ( country or experience about korea life ) but, you are not in korea :p Anyway, If I made you feel bad I apolize about that. Q. Do you have any tips for getting a good night\'s sleep? If so, please share a few. A. Actually, I don\'t have any tips to getting sleep well in night. Either I wanna know ^^ But, I heard one tip to getting sleep well is hot water ( not too hot ) makes relax. So hot water can help to getting sleep well. Or exercise can be help too. I usually sleep in 11PM cause I have to go company untill 8 AM. ( too tired .... ) I have pretty many schedules tomorrow, so I have to go bed early tonight. Have a good night and cheer up ! [ Tomorrow will be great day - K.[이름][이름] ]

강사 첨삭

Good evening!

I wasn\'t offended or anything Mr. [이름]! Hahaha!

Don\'t worry, I did ask because you maybe thought I\'m Korean. :)

Anyway, nothing to worry!

Thank you and good night. ^^


Miss. [Name],
 I am so sorry if I made you feel bad cause I asked where are you came from.
>>I\'m so sorry if I made you feel bad by asking where you\'re from.
I just asked with no reason at all.
>>I just asked for no reason.
 I just wanted sharing informations ( country or experience about korea life ) but, you are not in korea :p
>>I just wanted to share information, but you are not in Korea.
Anyway, If I made you feel bad I apolize about that.
>>Anyway, I apologize if I offended you.


Q. Do you have any tips for getting a good night\'s sleep? If so, please share a few.


A. Actually, I don\'t have any tips to getting sleep well in night.
>>Actually, I don\'t have any tips for a good night sleep.
Either I wanna know ^^
>>I also want to know.
 But, I heard one tip to getting sleep well is hot water ( not too hot ) makes relax.
>>But I heard that taking a hot shower relaxes you.
So hot water can help to getting sleep well.
>>So taking a hot shower can help you sleep well.
 Or exercise can be help too.
>>Exercising can help too.
 I usually sleep in 11PM cause I have to go company untill 8 AM. ( too tired .... )
>>I usually sleep at 11 pm because I have to go to work by 8 a.m.
 I have pretty many schedules tomorrow, so I have to go bed early tonight.
>>I have a lot of work to do tomorrow, so I have to go to bed early tonight.
 Have a good night and cheer up!
>>CORRECT!


 [ Tomorrow will be great day - K.[이름][이름] ]

>>Tomorrow will be a great day!

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