day 5_ homework

2018-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Happy Monday Sharon :) Thank you for correction in advance. HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Do you like to be taught by a male or female teacher? Answer in 5 sentences or more. l like female teacher to who is teach me. lt is comfortable and we can come to understand each other. Might be female teacher pay attention to details through work. this is make me hard studied. so, my opinion is that pretty helpul and good things.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

That was fast.

You are really concentrating on your studies nowadays.

That is a really good thing.

Please pay attention to correct word choice.

Take note of the correct expressions below.

~~ Teacher Sharon

l like female teacher to who is teach me.

>> l like a female teacher to teach me.
 lt is comfortable and we can come to understand each other.

>> lt is comfortable for me and we can understand each other.
 Might be female teacher pay attention to details through work.

>> A female teacher has great attention to detail and it shows in her work.
this is make me hard studied.

>> This makes me want to study hard.
 so, my opinion is that pretty helpul and good things.

>> So, in my opinion, these are helpful and good for me.

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