day 5_ homework
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Hi [이름]!
That sounds like a really interesting memory.
Thank you for sharing.
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
l have a good memory for last year my birthday.
>> I have a good memory of my birthday last year.
my friends has prepared some gifts and one of my friend room was wondeful decorated for me.
>> My friends prepared some gifts and one friend\'s room was wonderfully decorated for me.
l was really touched and almost cried that seeing what was circumstance.
>> l was really touched and I almost cried after seeing what they did.
in past these birthday, when came my friend birthday we did go on a trip to the Beach.
>> When my friend\'s birthday came, we went on a trip to the beach.
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